Essay writing

What Should I Avoid in a College Essay?

Q: What should I avoid writing about in a college essay?

Not specific topics so much as generic treatment: lists of achievements, clichés and stories with no reflection.

Q: Is it bad to start a college essay with a quote?

Usually, yes. It is a common cliché; start with your own moment or idea instead.

Q: Can I write about failure in a college essay?

Yes, if the reflection is mature and specific.

Avoid generic claims, copied templates, resume repetition, exaggerated hardship, wrong college names, and essays that no longer sound like you.

6 min readPublished 2026-08-04Last reviewed 2026-09-29

By Oxbrivy Editorial Team. Reviewed by Oxbrivy study-abroad writing desk.

Quick answer

Avoid essays that could have been written by anyone: clichéd openings, lists of achievements, generic claims about passion, and topics told without reflection. Also avoid ignoring the prompt, exceeding the word limit, and letting parents, consultants or AI take over your voice. A strong essay focuses on something specific and shows how you think.

Key takeaways

Avoid clichés and famous quotations as openings.
Do not turn the essay into a list of achievements.
Reflection matters more than a dramatic story.
Keep your own voice; heavily edited essays lose it.
Answer the prompt and respect the word limit.

Oxbrivy practical ranking

Use this as a starting point, then personalise it with your budget, profile, and course.

Prompt fit

Best for: Checking whether the essay answers the exact question before polishing language.

Watch out: A well-written essay can still fail if it ignores the prompt.

Specificity

Best for: Replacing generic claims with real moments, details, choices, and evidence.

Watch out: Sentences that any applicant could have written make the draft weaker.

Student voice

Best for: Keeping the final essay honest, clear, and recognisably the student's own work.

Watch out: Over-editing, copied templates, or AI-written paragraphs can flatten authenticity.

Common mistakes and what to do instead

The most frequent problems admissions readers see:

College essay mistakes and fixes
Mistake	Do this instead
Opening with a quotation or "Ever since I was young"	Start close to a real moment
Listing achievements	Focus on one experience and what it shows
"I am passionate about…"	Show the passion through a specific example
Dramatic story with no reflection	Explain what you learned or how you changed
Writing about someone else (a hero or parent)	Keep the focus on your thinking and actions
Generic "Why us?" answers	Name specific courses, programmes or opportunities
Formal, speech-like language	Write the way you speak, but clearly
Over-editing by others	Take feedback, but make every change yourself
Using AI to write text	Draft yourself; check each college’s AI policy
Ignoring the prompt	Answer the question asked
Going over the word limit	Cut repetition and filler
Typos and wrong college names	Proofread every version separately

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Topics to handle with care

Sports injuries, winning a competition, or a mission or service trip are common, so they need an unusual angle or insight.

Trauma and hardship can be powerful if you are ready to write about them and the essay focuses on your response and growth.

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Frequently asked questions

What should I avoid writing about in a college essay?